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PostPosted: Wed May 19, 2010 7:01 pm    Post subject: Stephanie - Headshots Reply with quote
As promised.....

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PostPosted: Wed May 19, 2010 9:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
#4 works best as pose for me, nice in-camera gaze, but she should take care of those stray hairs over the chest.
When I worked with Anna, she told me that models are instructed to take care that stray hairs never fall outside of the hair shapeline, unless art director/photographers ask for that.
In this case, I think that the stray hairs disturb a bit.
But good overall.


PostPosted: Wed May 19, 2010 10:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
great work ! .... love the hair. 4 and 5 my faves ...

Cheers
Tobias


PostPosted: Thu May 20, 2010 6:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
1 and 3 for me, superb portraits and what detail!


PostPosted: Thu May 20, 2010 8:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
For me I love #1 Her face is beaming and beautiful eyes... and I like the point Orio makes regarding the hair.


PostPosted: Thu May 20, 2010 8:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Thanks for the comments.

Orio wrote:
#4 works best as pose for me, nice in-camera gaze, but she should take care of those stray hairs over the chest.
When I worked with Anna, she told me that models are instructed to take care that stray hairs never fall outside of the hair shapeline, unless art director/photographers ask for that.
In this case, I think that the stray hairs disturb a bit.
But good overall.

Indeed Orio. This was really just an informal one and a kind of get-to-know-you shoot that was tacked onto the end of a previous shoot. There were too many people around to work with her properly, but I see plenty of potential in this model and she's keen to do something in the future which I'll make more formal and watch the QC. I'll probably get a make up artist to help with this problem. Initial results are very promising though.


PostPosted: Thu May 20, 2010 8:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
it look like a hair colorant advertising but those pics doesn't really beautify Stephanie, try natural lightning, flash are for busy pros


PostPosted: Thu May 20, 2010 11:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'm a bit hesitant of making any criticsm now, please take this as constructive. No 1 is the best for me, I think mainly because it's more intimate and I like her pleasant expression. 2 and 3 look a little untidy and rushed, as though she hasn't had time to compose herself. No 4 is my second best but I agree with Orio about the hair on her chest. No 5 is good too, but I'm not sure I like the area of blackness below her chin.


PostPosted: Thu May 20, 2010 12:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
#4 is my fave, hair, light, gaze.


PostPosted: Thu May 20, 2010 2:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Thanks for the comments.

It's odd that the same photo is both a favourite and seemingly fault-ridden.

Poilu - Being a stobist, I'm not a fan of natual light portraits, so more often than not a posed shot with have a strobe (or 3).
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