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dani9batan
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 Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 9:54 am Post subject: Casa de Campo, Madrid |
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dani9batan wrote:
It's near to my home, there ara a beautiful views.
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Jesito
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| Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 9:35 am Post subject: |
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Jesito wrote:
Hi Dani,
Is this a panoramic setup or a crop?
In my opinion there is something not working on this picture, I don't know really what it is, but the picture doesn't push too much.
Maybe the first plane leaves coming from the left upper corner are protruding too much, or the combo of water and sky take too much from the picture...
Not sure if the greens in the distance get a bit faint... I really don't know, but this picture doesn't appeal as much as some outstanding ones I've seen from you...
Kind regards.
Jes.
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Olivier
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Olivier wrote:
Beautiful place Dani.
I like this picture.
But, as Jes, I'm a bit "disappointed". Something doesn't work and I'm wondering wether it's the horizon plane or less water, maybe both.
Horizon slightly modified
version with less water
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dani9batan
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dani9batan wrote:
Don't worried Olivier, I like your version
Jes has reason; my picture dind't working; it's is a crop.
Regads.
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Olivier wrote:
Thank you Dani.
I didn't worry. It was simple courtesy. 
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tobbsman
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tobbsman wrote:
That's a beautiful scenery !
Like the compo as well, also with more water
Would be worth to make a stich from the scene ...
Cheers
Tobias
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Olivier
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Olivier wrote:
Yes, maybe more water ! 
Dani, try to make a pano like Tobias says.
(you can have a look at his great Panos tutorial)
Or maybe, as it is a crop, you have more water on the original photo ?
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