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PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 5:26 pm    Post subject: B&W Jupiter 9 Reply with quote

Canon 5D
Jupiter 9 at f2.8


Jupiter 9 at f2


PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 7:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like #1, her expression and the contrast between sharply defined coat and soft background are nice, and the composition is good.

#2 I find a little strange. The colouring of the bottle draws the eye to it - did you meant to show the bottle as the object of her desires?


PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 7:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

fantastic, I like the composition and expression a lot !

There is just too little detail in the face-areas for my tast, ... but that's just a matter of taste...

Cheers
Tobias


PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 8:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like both a lot!.
Nice bokeh....

Regards,

Jes.


PostPosted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 6:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks.

I would have loved to have more detail i their faces, but it was strong sunlight, and I find it very hard to get descent pic in that light.

About the coloured bottle, well I had absolutely no intentions, I just thought it made the pic more alive... Rolling Eyes


PostPosted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 4:13 pm    Post subject: Nice pictures! Reply with quote

Very pleasing to look at - but is the plane of sharpest focus actually behind the face in each photo? In #2 particularly, the frame of the chair seems slightly sharper than the face - but maybe that was deliberate to soften the face a little?


PostPosted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 4:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good portraits. I like better the first, good use of the shallow dof: the lady really stands out from the background. In the second one I find a little distracting the oof part in the foreground otherwise would a be good one either. Smile
Marty.