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PostPosted: Sun Jan 20, 2013 10:10 pm    Post subject: Stairway to .... crane :) Reply with quote


Got a bit mixed feelings about this one and love to know what you think about it.


PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 2:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I like the composition.
But, the left side of of the picture shadows the right side being brighter and more attractive for me eyes.
If it weren't for the title, probably I wouldn't noticed the crane's stairs.


PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 8:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Himself wrote:
I like the composition.
But, the left side of of the picture shadows the right side being brighter and more attractive for me eyes.
If it weren't for the title, probably I wouldn't noticed the crane's stairs.


You make a good point and might darken this if I should give the picture some more work.
Many thanks for the nice C&C, much appreciated!


PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I would single out the stairs above the open sky using a long tele. The building on the left and the other stuff in the background
make the picture too confused.
Better to show only a part of the stairs, but making it stand out, than to show more of it amongst confusion.


PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 8:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Orio wrote:
I would single out the stairs above the open sky using a long tele. The building on the left and the other stuff in the background
make the picture too confused.
Better to show only a part of the stairs, but making it stand out, than to show more of it amongst confusion.


Diden't have a longer tele with me and this place is not around the corner so it's not that easy to retake the shot.
But think I will scrap this picture.

Many thanks for the feedback, much appreciated!
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