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Attila
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 3:31 pm Post subject: Carl Zeiss Planar 50mm f1.4 portrait |
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Attila wrote:
This picture was my retouch exercise, I had to remove ugly background, makes skin to perfect look for magazines and fix eyes.
I am happy with skin and background removal on eye process I still have to learn much.
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kds315*
Joined: 12 Mar 2008 Posts: 16664 Location: Weinheim, Germany
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 3:36 pm Post subject: |
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kds315* wrote:
Certainly right that magazines seem to like that "look" and you did very well to adopt that.
Allow me a personal comment, I'm not happy about that, I like to see real skin, not photoshopped
"beauties" and Krisztina is a beautiful woman with beautiful real skin. But if your professional work
demands that, well then be it... _________________ Klaus - Admin
"S'il vient a point, me souviendra" [Thomas Bohier (1460-1523)]
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http://photographyoftheinvisibleworld.blogspot.com/ my UV BLOG
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X80QF f3.2/80mm
Hypergon f11/26mm
ELCAN UV f5.6/52mm
Zeiss UV-Planar f4/60mm
Zeiss UV-Planar f2/62mm
Lomo Уфар-12 f2.5/41mm
Lomo Зуфар-2 f4.0/350mm
Lomo ZIKAR-1A f1.2/100mm
Nikon UV Nikkor f4.5/105mm
Zeiss UV-Sonnar f4.3/105mm
CERCO UV-VIS-NIR f1.8/45mm
CERCO UV-VIS-NIR f4.1/94mm
CERCO UV-VIS-NIR f2.8/100mm
Steinheil Quarzobjektiv f1.8/50mm
Pentax Quartz Takumar f3.5/85mm
Carl Zeiss Jena UV-Objektiv f4/60mm
NYE OPTICAL Lyman-Alpha II f1.1/90mm
NYE OPTICAL Lyman-Alpha I f2.8/200mm
COASTAL OPTICS f4/60mm UV-VIS-IR Apo
COASTAL OPTICS f4.5/105mm UV-Micro-Apo
Pentax Ultra-Achromatic Takumar f4.5/85mm
Pentax Ultra-Achromatic Takumar f5.6/300mm
Rodenstock UV-Rodagon f5.6/60mm + 105mm + 150mm
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Attila
Joined: 24 Feb 2007 Posts: 57865 Location: Hungary
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 3:42 pm Post subject: |
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Attila wrote:
kds315* wrote: |
Certainly right that magazines seem to like that "look" and you did very well to adopt that.
Allow me a personal comment, I'm not happy about that, I like to see real skin, not photoshopped
"beauties" and Krisztina is a beautiful woman with beautiful real skin. But if your professional work
demands that, well then be it... |
thanks for kind comment. _________________ -------------------------------
Items on sale on Ebay
Sony NEX-7 Carl Zeiss Planar 85mm f1.4, Minolta MD 35mm f1.8, Konica 135mm f2.5, Minolta MD 50mm f1.2, Minolta MD 250mm f5.6, Carl Zeiss Sonnar 180mm f2.8
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poilu
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 10472 Location: Greece
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 4:07 pm Post subject: |
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poilu wrote:
wow! lucky Attila with such pretty woman ! _________________ T* |
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Orio
Joined: 24 Feb 2007 Posts: 29545 Location: West Emilia
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 4:15 pm Post subject: |
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Orio wrote:
Attila: perfect job with the colour photo, really!
The only thing wrong about the eyes are the multiple catch lights. They don't look very good, you should clone them out except ore or at maximum two of them.
Other than that... perfect. _________________ Orio, Administrator
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kds315*
Joined: 12 Mar 2008 Posts: 16664 Location: Weinheim, Germany
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 4:20 pm Post subject: |
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kds315* wrote:
P.S.: Talking about details, in the bw image, the white in her eyes looks too white, like the image background.
Coudl you give it a little tone and/or some fine structure? _________________ Klaus - Admin
"S'il vient a point, me souviendra" [Thomas Bohier (1460-1523)]
http://www.macrolenses.de for macro and special lens info
http://www.pbase.com/kds315/uv_photos for UV Images and lens/filter info
https://www.flickr.com/photos/kds315/albums my albums using various lenses
http://photographyoftheinvisibleworld.blogspot.com/ my UV BLOG
http://www.travelmeetsfood.com/blog Food + Travel BLOG
https://galeriafotografia.com Architecture + Drone photography
Currently most FAV lens(es):
X80QF f3.2/80mm
Hypergon f11/26mm
ELCAN UV f5.6/52mm
Zeiss UV-Planar f4/60mm
Zeiss UV-Planar f2/62mm
Lomo Уфар-12 f2.5/41mm
Lomo Зуфар-2 f4.0/350mm
Lomo ZIKAR-1A f1.2/100mm
Nikon UV Nikkor f4.5/105mm
Zeiss UV-Sonnar f4.3/105mm
CERCO UV-VIS-NIR f1.8/45mm
CERCO UV-VIS-NIR f4.1/94mm
CERCO UV-VIS-NIR f2.8/100mm
Steinheil Quarzobjektiv f1.8/50mm
Pentax Quartz Takumar f3.5/85mm
Carl Zeiss Jena UV-Objektiv f4/60mm
NYE OPTICAL Lyman-Alpha II f1.1/90mm
NYE OPTICAL Lyman-Alpha I f2.8/200mm
COASTAL OPTICS f4/60mm UV-VIS-IR Apo
COASTAL OPTICS f4.5/105mm UV-Micro-Apo
Pentax Ultra-Achromatic Takumar f4.5/85mm
Pentax Ultra-Achromatic Takumar f5.6/300mm
Rodenstock UV-Rodagon f5.6/60mm + 105mm + 150mm
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tomasg
Joined: 01 Nov 2009 Posts: 1135
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 4:35 pm Post subject: |
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tomasg wrote:
Great work on both of them and i must agree with what Orio and Klaus said about the eyes. Regarding the "wax doll" look of the skin, it s what the magazines require these days i guess. Not my cup of tea, but business is business.
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Attila
Joined: 24 Feb 2007 Posts: 57865 Location: Hungary
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:04 pm Post subject: |
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Attila wrote:
kds315* wrote: |
P.S.: Talking about details, in the bw image, the white in her eyes looks too white, like the image background.
Coudl you give it a little tone and/or some fine structure? |
Yes, I note it too, little ping pong ball light , still have to learn about eye process or just simple pass it to Christine to finish eyes well. _________________ -------------------------------
Items on sale on Ebay
Sony NEX-7 Carl Zeiss Planar 85mm f1.4, Minolta MD 35mm f1.8, Konica 135mm f2.5, Minolta MD 50mm f1.2, Minolta MD 250mm f5.6, Carl Zeiss Sonnar 180mm f2.8
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Attila
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:05 pm Post subject: |
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Attila wrote:
Orio wrote: |
Attila: perfect job with the colour photo, really!
The only thing wrong about the eyes are the multiple catch lights. They don't look very good, you should clone them out except ore or at maximum two of them.
Other than that... perfect. |
Thank you for valuable note, I will try to improve my knowledge and Chris will finish this picture before going to sale. _________________ -------------------------------
Items on sale on Ebay
Sony NEX-7 Carl Zeiss Planar 85mm f1.4, Minolta MD 35mm f1.8, Konica 135mm f2.5, Minolta MD 50mm f1.2, Minolta MD 250mm f5.6, Carl Zeiss Sonnar 180mm f2.8
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Attila
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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Attila wrote:
tomasg wrote: |
Great work on both of them and i must agree with what Orio and Klaus said about the eyes. Regarding the "wax doll" look of the skin, it s what the magazines require these days i guess. Not my cup of tea, but business is business.
Tomas |
Yes, thank you! _________________ -------------------------------
Items on sale on Ebay
Sony NEX-7 Carl Zeiss Planar 85mm f1.4, Minolta MD 35mm f1.8, Konica 135mm f2.5, Minolta MD 50mm f1.2, Minolta MD 250mm f5.6, Carl Zeiss Sonnar 180mm f2.8
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ManualFocus-G
Joined: 29 Dec 2008 Posts: 6622 Location: United Kingdom
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 11:33 pm Post subject: |
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ManualFocus-G wrote:
I'm not particularly knowledgeable about the specifics of portrait photography, but they look wonderful to me! The black and white version is very arty. _________________ Graham - Moderator
Shooter of choice: Fujifilm X-T20 with M42, PB and C/Y lenses
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fermy
Joined: 17 Feb 2012 Posts: 1974
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Posted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 12:19 am Post subject: |
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fermy wrote:
I also don't like when women are portrayed as plastic dolls, but IMHO you've taken your "smooth skin" technique down to perfection. Both portraits look natural and stunningly good. _________________ Many lenses and some film bodies for sale here: http://forum.mflenses.com/canon-fd-minolta-md-c-mounts-m42-pentax-and-more-t50465.html
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Attila
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Posted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 12:04 pm Post subject: |
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Attila wrote:
Many thanks my friends! _________________ -------------------------------
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Orio
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Posted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 12:39 pm Post subject: |
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Orio wrote:
fermy wrote: |
I also don't like when women are portrayed as plastic dolls, but IMHO you've taken your "smooth skin" technique down to perfection. |
I agree, skin retouch made with great taste, not overdone, bravo to Attila!
Beauty product companies will not pay you if you show a picture of woman with pores and too many wrinkles.
It's business, not art - but artists too need to eat and pay the rent. _________________ Orio, Administrator
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Attila
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Posted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 12:56 pm Post subject: |
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Attila wrote:
Orio wrote: |
fermy wrote: |
I also don't like when women are portrayed as plastic dolls, but IMHO you've taken your "smooth skin" technique down to perfection. |
I agree, skin retouch made with great taste, not overdone, bravo to Attila!
Beauty product companies will not pay you if you show a picture of woman with pores and too many wrinkles.
It's business, not art - but artists too need to eat and pay the rent. |
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Items on sale on Ebay
Sony NEX-7 Carl Zeiss Planar 85mm f1.4, Minolta MD 35mm f1.8, Konica 135mm f2.5, Minolta MD 50mm f1.2, Minolta MD 250mm f5.6, Carl Zeiss Sonnar 180mm f2.8
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kds315*
Joined: 12 Mar 2008 Posts: 16664 Location: Weinheim, Germany
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Posted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 1:21 pm Post subject: |
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kds315* wrote:
Orio wrote: |
fermy wrote: |
I also don't like when women are portrayed as plastic dolls, but IMHO you've taken your "smooth skin" technique down to perfection. |
I agree, skin retouch made with great taste, not overdone, bravo to Attila!
Beauty product companies will not pay you if you show a picture of woman with pores and too many wrinkles.
It's business, not art - but artists too need to eat and pay the rent. |
Very true words! _________________ Klaus - Admin
"S'il vient a point, me souviendra" [Thomas Bohier (1460-1523)]
http://www.macrolenses.de for macro and special lens info
http://www.pbase.com/kds315/uv_photos for UV Images and lens/filter info
https://www.flickr.com/photos/kds315/albums my albums using various lenses
http://photographyoftheinvisibleworld.blogspot.com/ my UV BLOG
http://www.travelmeetsfood.com/blog Food + Travel BLOG
https://galeriafotografia.com Architecture + Drone photography
Currently most FAV lens(es):
X80QF f3.2/80mm
Hypergon f11/26mm
ELCAN UV f5.6/52mm
Zeiss UV-Planar f4/60mm
Zeiss UV-Planar f2/62mm
Lomo Уфар-12 f2.5/41mm
Lomo Зуфар-2 f4.0/350mm
Lomo ZIKAR-1A f1.2/100mm
Nikon UV Nikkor f4.5/105mm
Zeiss UV-Sonnar f4.3/105mm
CERCO UV-VIS-NIR f1.8/45mm
CERCO UV-VIS-NIR f4.1/94mm
CERCO UV-VIS-NIR f2.8/100mm
Steinheil Quarzobjektiv f1.8/50mm
Pentax Quartz Takumar f3.5/85mm
Carl Zeiss Jena UV-Objektiv f4/60mm
NYE OPTICAL Lyman-Alpha II f1.1/90mm
NYE OPTICAL Lyman-Alpha I f2.8/200mm
COASTAL OPTICS f4/60mm UV-VIS-IR Apo
COASTAL OPTICS f4.5/105mm UV-Micro-Apo
Pentax Ultra-Achromatic Takumar f4.5/85mm
Pentax Ultra-Achromatic Takumar f5.6/300mm
Rodenstock UV-Rodagon f5.6/60mm + 105mm + 150mm
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