Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:31 am Post subject: |
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themoleman342 wrote:
Very nice indeed. It is a very common composition (taken on level with the person, tight framing of the face and shoulders, looking away from camera, with negative space to the side). This is not a bad thing by any means - I shoot these kind of shots most of the time. A non-traditional shot may actually add to your theme though. The undefined colors and sectionals of the eye are fantastic. I can't help but thing of the line: "eyes are the windows the the soul." An amazing mystery lies behind these eyes. Given the name "Psychose" the loose grain (probably due to the push processing) gives an appropriate atmosphere.
The singular highlight is distracting to me. Its placement and coloring don't fit well into the tonal range from top to bottom; the lighting from above slowly falls off. The highlight disrupts this pattern. Obviously things like this can't be avoided and it probably was not intentional.
I don't mean for any of my criticisms to be taken as mean, only helpful. Your probably a much better photographer than me. I look forward to future samples.
~Marc |