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 Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:11 pm Post subject: Braided hair girl: would this version be better? |
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Orio wrote:
Please let me know if you find this other picture of the braided girl less disturbing
(no more man in white)
I can try to clone out the child's arm in case...
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| Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:13 pm Post subject: |
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Orio wrote:
Here is the other picture for easier comparison:
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| Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:19 pm Post subject: |
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Nesster wrote:
Damn good cloning. Yes the new guy's less of a distraction. I like the child's hand, it adds a bit of strangeness.
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Orio wrote:
I did not clone, it's a different picture...
I am not sure if the striped shirt disturbs less than the white one... white catches the eye but it's less clashing with the historical atmosphere than a lettered t-shirt with shoulder bag and those big sneackers....
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Gurdie wrote:
I agree with Nesster - I like the child´s pointing finger. I would try to darken the striped T-shirt and shoes, the shoulder bag doesn´t bother me.
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Nesster wrote:
 so it is! What you can do is blur/smudge the offending stripes and logo, and darken the shoes. But I see what you mean, the guy in the white isn't too offensive.
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| Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:47 pm Post subject: |
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Katastrofo wrote:
I like the first one much better! |
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Attila wrote:
#1 for me too, there is something... second for me doesn't say much.
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Orio wrote:
Thanks guys! I listen to you and will keep the newer one (#1) and try to work on it to improve it, following some of your suggestions (such as darkening the t-shirt -sounds like a great idea).
Will post the result when I have it.
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| Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 11:55 am Post subject: |
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Orio wrote:
OK, this is the final release candidate. After a lot of Photoshop work:
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Katastrofo wrote:
Very nice, although it appears darker than the others. |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 1:52 pm Post subject: |
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Orio wrote:
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| Very nice, although it appears darker than the others. |
Would you like it better this way?:
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Jieffe wrote:
Yep, the last one does it for me ... she stands out of the crowd nicely this way.
It was my idea when I first saw the pic but I hate to tincker with other people's work.
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| Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 2:13 pm Post subject: |
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Orio wrote:
| Jieffe wrote: |
Yep, the last one does it for me ... she stands out of the crowd nicely this way.
It was my idea when I first saw the pic but I hate to tincker with other people's work.
Nicely done, Orio ... [Jedi mode on]You are my master[Jedi mode off] |
Thanks Jieffe. I enjoy all constructive criticism, even more so in an occasion like this when I enter pictures to a contest. Of course then it's me who have to make the final choices and decide which advice to take and which not, but all advices are considered. I have to say that with regards to this picture, the advices have all been *extremely* helpful. For instance, that of burning the guy with the striped shirt was a saver. And also this advice about the too dark picture was right. 
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| Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 2:15 pm Post subject: |
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Orio wrote:
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[Jedi mode on]You are my master[Jedi mode off] |
May the Focus be with you 
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Gurdie wrote:
I like the result. Also the frame supports the picture, but I´m sorry to see that you cropped out the finger. I did find that detail the extra something, that makes a picture stand out.
Only one picture allowed in the contest?
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Orio wrote:
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| I like the result. Also the frame supports the picture, but I´m sorry to see that you cropped out the finger. I did find that detail the extra something, that makes a picture stand out. |
I have been thinking about it.
The problem is that a contest jury is likely to be more picky than understanding, in general. Also this is not Pulitzer contest, but a local one, so even more so.
I thought that the odds that someone in the jury could kill the picture because of the "hand without owner" were bigger than the chances of finding a jury that would appreciate the weird detail. 
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| Only one picture allowed in the contest? |
No, it's three, but I have been working on this one so far.
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Gurdie wrote:
Yes, I understand. Probably better to play safe at least for the first time. 
Do you make a print from the photo, or is this a virtual contest? (You could make a flap on the print frame and show the hand only for those, who have the same weird sense of humour than me.) 
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Katastrofo wrote:
Last one does it for me, excellent! |
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patrickh wrote:
Last one definitely, but I miss the "pointing finger"
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| Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:14 pm Post subject: |
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Orio wrote:
This photo made it into the 36 finalists and will be displayed in the exhibition inside the castle of San Secondo from August 27th.
It did not win any of the first three prizes however.
The other two photos I sent (the B&W portrait and the couple of nobles) were rejected
I will go to the exhibition on the 30th when they will deliver a paper to the finalists, I am curious to see about the other photos.
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| Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:36 am Post subject: |
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poilu wrote:
congrats Orio! that's great to be in the exhibition |
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my_photography wrote:
Great to hear this went to the final round.
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Jieffe wrote:
| Orio wrote: |
It did not win any of the first three prizes however.
The other two photos I sent (the B&W portrait and the couple of nobles) were rejected |
...but you're one of the best 36 photographers ! Congrats, Orio, I'm really happy for you |
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estudleon wrote:
The contest jury. What a theme!! Almost all, once in our life, wanted to kill (virtually) one of them. The fashion, subjetivity, good-bad day, etc make a difficult activity to present opus in contest.
I think that can be better to support a little exhibition and promote it in magazines, radio, cheaps tv cannals, etc.
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