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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2012 11:59 am    Post subject: The Great Outdoors Reply with quote

Aram discovering the garden of his grandfather.








Camera: NEX-5 (ISO200, f/1.5, 1/4000s)
Lens: Zeiss-Opton Sonnar 50mm f/1.5 T (Contax)

I like this kind of retro-look, not sure if you agree with me.


PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2012 12:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wonderful photos ! The whole world is new !


PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2012 3:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Personally not fond of the look - the shots are intrinsically great though (how could a kid shot fail?) To my weak old eyes these look as though they have excessive adjustment to the contrast.



patrickh


PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2012 3:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Composition and timing are just great, but there's something in rendering (maybe PP, maybe OOF areas rendering) that make those a bit "harsh" in a way that doesn't fit very well with the atmosphere of the scene. Probably is a matter of personal taste, anyway.


PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2012 4:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

patrickh wrote:
Personally not fond of the look - the shots are intrinsically great though (how could a kid shot fail?)


+1
Retro look and very young child do not match well unless the child is wearing retro clothes - which is not.
Also I think it's a mistake also on the communication, the photo should show wonderful "new" colours (because for a child this young everything is new),
in other words show the world as if it was seen through "new eyes"
But I doubt that new eyes would see world as a greenish soup - on the contrary I would expect bold, adventurous colours.


PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2012 4:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

patrickh wrote:
Personally not fond of the look - the shots are intrinsically great though (how could a kid shot fail?) To my weak old eyes these look as though they have excessive adjustment to the contrast.



patrickh


Yes, I'm thinking something along these lines also - if vintage/aged print film is what you are after, the contrast needs to be a bit lower.


PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2012 5:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Love the shots but the colour is strange as if the red channel has been taken down to near zero.


PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2012 6:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I see a magenta cast.


PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 8:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for your comments.

I'll give it a rest and put myself at the drawing table again in a few days Smile


PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 10:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Orio wrote:
patrickh wrote:
Personally not fond of the look - the shots are intrinsically great though (how could a kid shot fail?)


+1
Retro look and very young child do not match well unless the child is wearing retro clothes - which is not.
Also I think it's a mistake also on the communication, the photo should show wonderful "new" colours (because for a child this young everything is new),
in other words show the world as if it was seen through "new eyes"
But I doubt that new eyes would see world as a greenish soup - on the contrary I would expect bold, adventurous colours.


I agree with Orio here. Post processing and the subject don't match. Compositions are fine though.